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How to Create Email Content That Converts

Plain-text, skimmable emails convert potential therapy clients significantly better than styled newsletters. Styled newsletter templates…

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Written by Nicole McCance

Plain-text, skimmable emails convert potential therapy clients significantly better than styled newsletters. Styled newsletter templates with background colors and visual banners often look like advertisements, driving down engagement.


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To build trust and encourage bookings, marketing emails should be scannable, utilize short paragraphs with generous white space, and feature compelling subject lines.


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1. Format for Engagement and Readability

  • Keep It Plain Text: Format messages to look like personal, one-on-one emails rather than marketing broadcasts.

  • Prioritize Subject Lines: Craft subject lines that promise utility or offer an intriguing perspective. Unopened emails cannot generate consultation bookings.

  • Structure for Skimming: Use brief, multi-line paragraphs and ample spacing to prevent dense text blocks.

2. Apply the "VALUE" Writing Framework

Use the VALUE framework to write short, high-converting emails grounded in empathy and practical value:

  • V — Value Premise (Subject Line): Promise a clear, useful takeaway or insight right in the subject line (e.g., "One question that can quiet an overactive mind").

  • A — Acknowledge the Struggle: Express immediate empathy for the reader's experience to normalize their challenges (e.g., "Have you ever noticed your mind replaying conversations and worrying about tomorrow?").

  • L — Learn a Strategy: Share a quick, high-value actionable insight or self-reflection prompt (e.g., "Ask yourself: Is this something I can control today?").

  • U — Understand They Are Not Alone: Reframe the issue as a common human experience to reduce stigma (e.g., "Overthinking is something almost everyone experiences from time to time").

  • E — Encourage the Next Step: Include a direct call to action (CTA) encouraging the reader to take action.

3. Tailor CTAs by Audience Segment

To ensure relevance, sequence messaging based on whether the recipient is a lead or an active/past client:

Audience Segment

Primary Objective

Call to Action (CTA) Strategy

Leads (Inquired/cancelled without booking)

Convert interested leads into active clients.

Direct CTAs inviting them to book a free 20-minute consultation.

Clients (Current, past, or paused)

Nurture trust, reduce initial no-shows, and maintain long-term retention.

Gentle support reminders without direct sales pitches (e.g., "If you're looking for support, we're here whenever you need us").

4. Automation Best Practices

  • Sequential Progression: Set up automated 12-month sequences where new opt-ins always begin at Email 1, receiving one high-value email per month regardless of when they subscribe.

  • Dynamic Fields: Use merge fields from Custom Values to personalize recipient details. Contact tags segment your audience; they are separate from merge fields. Verify booking links and practice sign-offs before sending.

  • Drafting Workflow: Draft and review email copy in a standalone document editor first before pasting the finalized text into your CRM or email platform.

5. Build Your Email in the ClinicMonk™ Editor

Follow these steps to turn your copy into a readable email. The screenshots use a clearly labelled Sandbox draft.


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Step 1: Open a new email and choose Plain text editor

  1. Click Marketing → Emails → Campaigns.

  2. Click New → Blank.

  3. Under Plain text editor, click Select (teal arrow 1). This gives you the simple, personal email format described above.

  4. Click the campaign name at the top and give your draft a clear name your team will recognize.

Choose Plain text editor with teal arrow 1

Click the screenshot to see it full size.


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For the starting screen, see Where to start a newsletter in ClinicMonk™.


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Step 2: Paste your copy and format it

  1. Click in the email body and paste your reviewed copy.

  2. Keep the Paragraph style for normal body text (arrow 1). Use short paragraphs and press Enter to separate them. Add a blank line where you want more white space.

  3. To emphasize a few words, select them and click B for bold (arrow 2). The neighbouring italic and underline buttons work the same way.

  4. Use the line-height dropdown to adjust spacing (arrow 3). Keep one consistent font and readable size. Avoid styling every paragraph.

Plain text email editor with teal arrows for paragraph style, bold and line height

Click the screenshot to see it full size.


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Step 3: Add the recipient’s first name

  1. Place your cursor after “Hi ” in the greeting.

  2. Click Custom Values in the toolbar (arrow 1), choose Contact, then click First Name (arrow 2).

  3. The editor inserts a highlighted first-name merge field. Add your comma after the field. Keep the field intact so ClinicMonk™ can personalize each recipient’s greeting.

Custom Values menu showing Contact First Name with teal arrows

Click the screenshot to see it full size.


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Step 4: Link your call to action

  1. Write descriptive text such as “Book a free consult,” then highlight that text in the email body.

  2. Click Add/Edit Link, the chain icon in the toolbar.

  3. Paste your clinic’s full booking address into Link URL (arrow 1). Check Text to display still contains your call to action (arrow 2).

  4. Click Save in the link window (arrow 3). Check the linked words are still on their own line and restore paragraph spacing if needed.

Add Edit Link window with teal arrows for Link URL, Text to display and Save

Click the screenshot to see it full size.


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Use your own booking link. The screenshot uses a sample address. Get the correct link using Consult Booking Overview and Website Connection, then verify it opens your clinic’s calendar.


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Step 5: Save and review before sending

  1. Click Save at the top and check the saved status.

  2. Click Preview to check the greeting, paragraph spacing and call to action.

  3. Check the booking destination, clinic sign-off, subject line and intended audience before you send or schedule the email. Follow Nurture Emails: What Contacts Receive and When when choosing a nurture audience, or Email FAQs if you need help with email settings.

Editing this draft does not update your existing nurture workflow emails. See Your Done-for-You Email Marketing in ClinicMonk™ for how those sequences work.

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